HEXSPHERE BETA READERS NEEDED!
What I need:
Are there any plot holes?
Are there any world building discrepancies?
Is there anything that throws you off?
Any character discrepancies?
And anything else that flags you.
Also I need the feedback by June 15th :-) THANK YOU!!!
Remember this draft has not been line edited, nor has it been edited for grammar or typos yet. I want to make sure that the story, the world and the character arcs are all solid before I dig in deep for the line edits. And after I'm done with that, it'll go to another round of CPs, and after that, it's headed to the Enchanted Ink Publishing for copy editing!
Are there any plot holes?
Are there any world building discrepancies?
Is there anything that throws you off?
Any character discrepancies?
And anything else that flags you.
Also I need the feedback by June 15th :-) THANK YOU!!!
Remember this draft has not been line edited, nor has it been edited for grammar or typos yet. I want to make sure that the story, the world and the character arcs are all solid before I dig in deep for the line edits. And after I'm done with that, it'll go to another round of CPs, and after that, it's headed to the Enchanted Ink Publishing for copy editing!
Hexsphere is a YA Sci-fi/fantasy set in an alternate Earth where spell casting is science-based and is the only weapon used on the planet.
It follows two girls. Ella who is a Dis-con, a rare trait that makes her immune to spells and that the world considers dangerous. So dangerous that all Dis-cons are hunted by Trackers and killed on sight. And Wren who is a powerful spellcaster who has dedicated her life to helping Dis-cons since her mother was one and was murdered by Trackers.
Ella and Wren must work together for the common good: take down the Trackers at any cost to keep the Dis-cons safe.
It follows two girls. Ella who is a Dis-con, a rare trait that makes her immune to spells and that the world considers dangerous. So dangerous that all Dis-cons are hunted by Trackers and killed on sight. And Wren who is a powerful spellcaster who has dedicated her life to helping Dis-cons since her mother was one and was murdered by Trackers.
Ella and Wren must work together for the common good: take down the Trackers at any cost to keep the Dis-cons safe.